Fanfic: *North Park* Pt. 1

Oct 25, 199817 posts by 9 posters
17 posts
Gyrex Derision

Okay I'm going to try to make this a nice fanfic... ...so please be respectful this is my first time...

Oh yeah especially kyle Broslofski tell me if you like it!!!

<insert legal s**t here>
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<Scene starts at bustop>

Stan: Hey Kyle, my cousin from North Park is coming over to visit me.

Kyle: Cool dude. Hey, I have a cousin that lives there too! Weird!

Stan: Hey let's ask Kenny and Fatass if they have cousins that live up there too!

<Kenny and Cartman walk up, Kenny is laughing his head off>

Stan: Dude what's so funny Kenny?

Cartman: <quickly> Nothing!

Kenny: mhmh mmh mhmhm mhmhm -- (Cartman has lost his -->)

<Cartman cuts Kenny off>

Cartman: My Jacket, that's it my jacket.

Kyle: Kenny wouldn't be laughing if you had just lost you jacket, fatass!

Cartman: Ay!! Screw you! And I'm not fat, just too big for my body!!

Stan: Oh yeah, Kenny, do you have a cousin that lives up in North Park?

Kenny: mhm mhmh, mhm mhm mhmhm mhmh mhm mhmh mhmm. (Oh yeah, I do and his name is Lenny)

Stan: Wow. This is pretty f**ked up right here.

Kyle: Dude where the hell is the bus and that bitch?

<as if on cue, the bus pulls up>

Kyle: about f**king time!

Crabtree: WHAT DID YOU SAY??!!

Kyle: I said I hate f**king limes!

Crabtree: Oh. I hate those too.

<the kids get on the bus>

<Garrison's class>

Garrison: ...so that's how Maverick caught the bad guy.

Kyle: Dude, how does that hove to do with the American Revolution?

Garrison: Kyle, who is the teacher here.

Kyle: But I thought that--

Mr. Hat: You THOUGHT! YOU THOUGHT! YOU WORTHLESS PIECE OF---

Garrison: Now Mr. Hat let's not let our negative feelings get the best of us. Kyle, go stand in the corner.

Kyle: Dammit!

<bell rings>

Stan: <laughing>

Kyle: What's so funny?

Stan: Kenny told me what fatass lost this morning. Do you have any idea what a sh- shfincter is?

Kyle: No.

Kenny: <Laughs so hard he falls over>

Stan: Well fatass told me he also has a cousin that lives in North Park, so we're going over to his house.

<Cartman's house>

<the scamps are watching T & P>

Terrance: Hey Phillip, I think I've got a wedgie!

Phillip: Well, what are you going to do about it?

<Terrance farts>

Terrance: Well that cleared it out!

<T & P laugh>

Scamps: <laugh>

<doorbell rings>

< a figure that looks alot like Cartman, but dressed in a rich fashion walks in>

Blaric Chortman: Hello you poor losers.

Stan: Look it's a rich version of fatass.

Cartman: <sarcastically> Hello, cousin Blaric.

Chortman: What do you want you povertous troll. Why If I didn't know better I'd say you looked as bad as a fanfic writer after sleepless nights of writing!

<a loud booming voice is heard in the background>

Drew: I Resent that! I'll have to make you do something stupid in an upcoming scene!

Chortman: Dammit!

<doorbell rings again>

<A figure looking alot like Kyle comes in>

Lyle Kanovski: Oh look it's my cousin Kyle, the loser spoiled brat.

Kyle: <beep> you!

Stan: This is really f<bleep>ed up right here.

<doorbell>

Gennedy Tartakofsky: Oops, wrong cartoon. Anyone know how to get to Dexter's Laboratory?

<he leaves>

<doorbell>

Fran Swamp: Hi Stan. Yes I know I have a girl's name.

Kyle: Dude, your cousin is a guy named FRAN? <laugh>

<doorbell>

Lenny McDouglas: mmh mhmhm mhmh mhmhm (Hello poor cousin Kenny)

<Lenny is a blue version of Kenny, only very rich and suave>

Kenny: mmhm mmhmh mhmhm mhmhm hmmhm hmhmhm! (Holy <beep> this is screwed up!)

Stan: Well I guess we'll have to show them the town.

<-----PART 2 COMING SOON!------>

I bet it sucked, right?

Comments, criticism, anything!!!

In the name of Beefcake,

Gyrex --------- "I have been called many things, but 'skeptical' is definitely not one of them" --Fox Mulder, The X Files

"Maybe if you kick it it will work." --Homer Simpson, The Simpsons

"*PLONK*" --Originated from alt.tv.southpark

                NOTICE:
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     (Unless you are a troll)

it isn't much, cuz I'm just laying out the details in this first one.

In the name of Beefcake,

Gyrex --------- "I have been called many things, but 'skeptical' is definitely not one of them" --Fox Mulder, The X Files

"Maybe if you kick it it will work." --Homer Simpson, The Simpsons

"*PLONK*" --Originated from alt.tv.southpark

                NOTICE:
NO PEOPLE WERE PLONKED IN
THE MAKING OF THIS SIGNATURE
     (Unless you are a troll)

In article , "Gyrex" wrote:

That one was great. Welcome aboard the fanfic bandwagon. Good job, kemosabe. :)

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Kyle BroslofskiGyrex Derision

<snippies!>

*TOTALLY* kick ass!!!!! :) There were a bunch o'great lines in there! :) *GREAT* story idea!!! *EXCELLENT* fanfic!!!!!!!!! :) <passes the cookies> Dude! And this is only your first fanfic <shudders, once again remembering *my* first fanfic--never finished it yet--let's just say methinks it sucks, plus I have one hell of a case of writer's block over that one!> You totally kick ass!!!!! :)

~Kyle Broslofski~

<stares at computer screen> Part two.....Part twwwwoooooo! <eyes go pinwheely> *NEED* part twooooooooo!

Dude? REALLY?? You think so?? Wow. Stunned. Sweeet! <shares cookies> Wow Kyle, send me a copy of your first fanfic thru e-mail.

<snap>

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT, THE MASTER OF FANFICS SAID MY FANFIC KICKED ASS!!! SWEEET!!

In the name of Beefcake,

Gyrex --------- "I have been called many things, but 'skeptical' is definitely not one of them" --Fox Mulder, The X Files

"Maybe if you kick it it will work." --Homer Simpson, The Simpsons

"*PLONK*" --Originated from alt.tv.southpark

                NOTICE:
NO PEOPLE WERE PLONKED IN
THE MAKING OF THIS SIGNATURE
     (Unless you are a troll)
Kyle BroslofskiGyrex Derision

Yuppers! :)

Wow. Stunned. Sweeet! <shares cookies>

Ok. Will do! :) (I'll send my first fanfic--first one ever started but not completed, and then my first one started and finished)

Oh, so I have a title! :)

~Kyle Broslofski~

I'm sorry, Kyle. This is in no way meant to belittle you, because I think you're a hell of a fic writer. But, I'd have to say the master of fanfics is Martin Hazelbower

Jeff

In article , "Jeff Plas" wrote:

Yippee! A title for me too!

Martin "I'm the Dude, man!" --Jeff Lebowski (Remove kill_all_the_spammers to reply)

First the master of fics was Snow but now it is defenitly Kyle.

And I'm somewhere at the end of the list

Kyle BroslofskiJeff Plas

Don't worry--no offense or sticky stuff taken! ;) And, thanks! :) Yes, I agree, Martin kicks major ass!!!!! And, personally, I think *all* fanfic writers deserve neato titles, since I've never ever read any fanfics that sucked. Well, Doc Wonmug-or-whatever-the-hell-its-name-is-now's "fanfics" (and, here I'm using that term quite loosely--I just don't know *WHAT* you'd call those thingies he writes!) suck, but that just goes without saying. All the fanfic writers here kick ass! <passes cookies to fanfic writers> <passes turpentine and gravel to Doc Wonmug>

~Kyle Broslofski~

I loved the fic but this is oddly similer to a fan fic on the hell hole sight titled North Park: Te Replacement.

-Dan

BitchMomGyrex Derision

"Gyrex" wrote:

<snip of great story>

Actually, I thought it was really good. I like how you stick to the way the characters were originally created. Don't forget to have them go to Chef for something. That is something I've noticed gets missed a lot in other fanfic.

Keep up the good work. I don't always read the fanfic, but I'll keep an eye out for yours.

BitchMom

Wow! You guys actually *LIKE* Me!! Kick ass!!

In the name of Beefcake,

Gyrex --------- "I have been called many things, but 'skeptical' is definitely not one of them" --Fox Mulder, The X Files

"Maybe if you kick it it will work." --Homer Simpson, The Simpsons

"*PLONK*" --Originated from alt.tv.southpark

                NOTICE:
NO PEOPLE WERE PLONKED IN
THE MAKING OF THIS SIGNATURE
     (Unless you are a troll)

Why wouldn't me--I don't write Fan-Fic, I don't think I'm good enough (Kim, I know, you liked Time Machine.), but that was kick-ass

Ash "We do not see things as they are, We see them as we are." -Anais Nin "To those who can dream there is no such place as faraway."� Anonymous

That's very cool. In lieu of good luck cookies, please accept a joint made out of instant coffee crystals and pastry dough.

(note to self: what would happen if you smoked a joint made of instant coffee crystals and pastry dough? Would it be funny?)

Martin "I'm the Dude, man!" --Jeff Lebowski (Remove kill_all_the_spammers to reply)

Gyrex wrote in message ...

<snip, OW MY FINGER, FUCKING SCISSORRS!!!>

That was great, what do you think of mine? no-one else will tellme!!

<Jem sobs!!>

n e way cant wait for part 2!