Fight

Jul 31, 19999 posts by 7 posters
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Alyssa

Title is tentative. Aaaand, yes, I do believe this is another serious Kenny fic! This one is REALLY dark and angsty, though. Oh, and for this one, ignore the fact that in the Chickenlover ep, Kenny was watching too...

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Fight
Summary: Kenny's thoughts on what he wants... and can't have.
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   Screaming in the next room. I've heard it before. I know what's going on.
Dad's gone out and gotten drunk again, no doubt spending all the money we
somehow managed to earn on it... he and Mom are yelling at each other, Mom
screaming at him that he needs to stop drinking, get help, get over it...
him shouting back at her, calling her a dirty bitch and telling her to shut
her fucking mouth. Kevin's in there, watching them and laughing. How he gets
amusement from that, I'll never know. I'm scared to death. Scared that maybe
he'll really hurt Mom, or Kevin, or even me... I know he could kill me. I'm
just a little kid who's short for his age and a little frail. I'm the
weakling in the family.
   That was definitely a bottle breaking against the wall. I squeeze my eyes
shut. The cheap wallpaper in the house is all torn and alcohol-stained from
when Mom and Dad fight, and Dad throws the bottle of whatever Godawful stuff
he's drinking that night at her... he always misses, too drunk to aim... I
hope he never actually hits Mom. I'm curled up in a corner in the room, my
hood pulled tightly shut, holding myself tightly to give the comfort I can't
get, wishing it'd all just end. I wish I could have a normal family, like
Stan's... he complains when his mom tries to tell him normal things... like
to stop swearing, or look both ways, or something... but damn it, she's just
looking out for him, she's being the normal mom he's fucking lucky to
have... any family, even Kyle's or Cartman's, I'd rather have, than this
one, with the alcoholic father who's driven us to poverty, the mother
stretched thin, almost to breaking, and the brother who keeps laughing when
they're trying to kill each other... I don't want this. Even if the only
escape is death... I want to get away. I want someone to hold me and make it
all better, I want Dad to stop drinking, and Kevin to stop with the
goddamned laughing...
   Mom's crying now, and I can hear that the fight's gotten physical. She'll
win. She always wins. He's too drunk to fight. But he could hurt her, and
I'm always afraid of that. He has no sense of reason in this state, and
dammit, he's hardly ever sober... he's always fucking drinking, and
sometimes he doesn't come home at night because he's passed out at the
bar... and... he's always fighting... and...
   I can't stop crying now. I want this to end. I want this to fucking end.
I want a normal life, with a normal family.
   But I can't have that.
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AndiAlyssa

Awesome 'fic, Alyssa! ::passes out frappacinos and cookies::

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DaveAndi

Frappawhat?

A tall latte, dusted with cinnamon, sprinkled with chocolate shavings, and a dollop of cream please; not so much that it gives me a white mustache when I drink it, but not to little that it dissipates before I commence to drinking.

If you don't mind. :)

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AndiDave

Hehe, yep!

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SaraJAlyssa

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Wow...that was one of the more intense fanfics I've read. Not bad.

SaraJ I don't suffer from insanity.I like every minute of it. SNAFU=Situation Normal:All Fucked Up

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the_davesterAlyssa

Great fanfic, it really seems that this is the way that Kenny feels sometimes... excellent job! :)

the_davester http://www.geocities.com/~dgisoft/nirvana/ "Teenage angst has paid off well, now I'm bored and old" "I miss the comfort in being sad" -- Nirvana "Everyone is entitled to their opinions -- no matter how wrong they are" "Sentience is overrated" --Me

In article , "Alyssa" wrote:

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Entering philosopher mode: Sheesh! That 'fic really opened my eyes. I never thought how Kenny might actually feel behind closed doors! What an amazing piece of 'fic!

In article , Alyssa writes

Drew Thomas

This is the kind of fanfic that can be classified as art.

In article , Alyssa writes

Drew Thomas

Kickass fic!

BTW:When are you going to write a fic involving Lenni?

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