fanfic " DONT f*** WENDY TESTEBURGER! "

Oct 24, 19986 posts by 5 postersalt.tv.southpark
6 posts

Okay this is my first fanfic. I'm only 11y/o so here go's!

--Classroom-- ( Monday, right after weekend )

Kyle:- how was your weekend Stan?

Stan:-I went on a hot date with Wendy!

(kids crowd Stan)

Kyle- did you kiss her?

Cartman- is that why you were late home? your mom called us all!

Kenny- mph mph mpph mpph mpph mph mph mpph? (Did you make love down by the fire?)

Stan-No! we just...talked

( kids move away, disgusted )

Cartman- you...TALKED!!

Stan- yea, we talked about WW2, death ( looks at Kenny ), big Gay Al ( looks at Mr.. Garrison ).

scamps-laugh at Mr.. Garrison

Garrison- What? stop laughing yOU LITTLE...

(bell rings, words cant be heard over bell)

Garrison- Okay, well that was good!

Mr.. Hat- You showed them!

Garrison- Today we're going to learn about pot-bellied elephants...

--Bus stop-- Kyle- What happened?

Stan-nothing... we talked

Kenny-mph mph mph m mppppm? (Did you use a condom?)

Stan-NOTHING HAPPENED. I'm going home!

Cartman- dont forget to pick up some more rubbers for tonight!

Stan-Go get him Sparky

(Sparky tries to hump Cartman!)

Cartman- Son of a bitch!

--Stans house-- (Stan sobs in corner)

Grandpa-Whats wrong Stan?

Stan-I like Wendy, but all she ever wants to do is talk talk talk talk talk...!

Grandpa-oh I see, well treat them mean,keep em keen!

(Stan still crys)

Grandpa- Terrance and Philip is on, come watch it with me

( Turn tele on)

Terrance-Fart!

Philip- HA HA You farted!

( Stan cheers up, the door bell goes, Grandpa opens door, Kyle's mom enters)

Mrs. Brofloski- Whats that! Terrance and Philip! HUH!

(Mrs. Brofloski turns TV off)

(Stan crys again!)

--The next day, Playground--

( Scamps stand in line )

(Wendy walks on screen)

Wendy- Hi Stan!

(Stan turns to face opposite direction)

Stan- hi

Wendy- whats the matter Stan?

Stan- We never make love down by the fire!

Wendy- But Stan I didn't know you wanted to!

(Stan turns to face Wendy)

Stan- then can we...

Wendy-Sure!

(Stan faints)

--the next day, Bus stop--

Stan-... and we used a dildo and everything!

Kenny- mph mph mph mpppph mppppph mp mpppppph mph (did you use Kyle's brother or Cartmans cat?)

(Kyle and Cartman fight Kenny, and his head rolls into Jimbos gun shop)

Jimbo-Its coming right for us!

(BANG!)

FIN

I hope you liked it, it was my first and I am only 11 y/o so...

# . # - ) # . Either he's dead or my watch has stopped!

well... It was a average fic and great for a first try. A piece of advice is not to make many referances to other episodes because they don't talk about past episodes in south park so why should we do it in a fic. Also think up better plots. KEEP WRITING

<<A piece of advice is not to make many referances to other episodes because they don't talk about past episodes in south park so why should we do it in a fic.>>

Six words... City On The Edge Of Forever.

No quotes, will have some after Pinkeye.

11 years old, you ought to be ashamed of yourself.

Jem Alexander wrote:

It was good, for a first attempt.

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