Fanfic: the creators. Part one of ? (crossposted)

Jan 27, 19993 posts by 3 posters
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AshRead

"The Creators"� a South Park FanFic.

Note� this is my first fanfic, so try to be gentle, MMMKay? its also based loosly on a certain group of NG posters <g> you know who you are! Dedication: To the people who love me, and have made me happy.

Setting, the boys at the stop.

Wendy comes walking with a girl of about 17-ish. The older girl is wearing a dark green coat with a white hat. Wendy: Hey guys Hello, Stan. This is my cousin Ashley, from Iowa Stan: Hey Wendy :::Barfs:::: hey Ashley� nice to have you here Wendy: You'll never guess who's from South Park, and coming back! Kyle: Who? Someone famous? Ashley: One of the creators of Terrance and Philip is from South Park, and him and the other creator are going to be here�I'm so exited! Cartman: Sweet! Stan: Where are they staying? At the South Park Lodge? Wendy: We think so. That's also where Ash and her parents are staying. She wants to see them for some reason, but she won't tell me why. Ashley: that's none of your concern, Wendy. Now we better be going. Stan: Wait, don't go.Let me walk you to the hotel. Kyle: awwww�Stan is in love with Wendy Stan: shut up! :::barfs::: Ashley: come on, I have a very important phone call to make. Scene: a hotel room. Two men in it. Guess who? Man one: So, why are we here again? Man two: bro, I told you! I'm getting an award for being a 'destingwished alumni' Man one: Trey, bro. You are the only famous person to come out of South Par Trey: Matt. Shut up! Scene: Ashley In hotel room on phone Ash: yes, I'll try. Yes, I am aware of how hot he is. I know, I know!. Bye! Wendy: are you done with the phone? Ash: yeah, I am. Stan: Who'd you call. Ash: My friend..About Trey being here. Stan: Trey? Ash: co-creator of Terrence and Phillip ::sigh::: Wendy: mom said its time for dinner. They do downstairs to the dining room..Ash is seated with Trey and Matt.

Will Trey make Ash faint? Will Wendy and Stan ever kiss? Will Ashley Make cartman wear a dress for no reason? (cartman: ay!) Will Ashley ever do her make up work? (I doubt it) Stay tuned for part 2�later today, I guess.

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In article , [email] (AshRead) wrote:

Not a bad beginning, especially for a first fic. One suggestion for writing style (just to make it read a little easier), put any scene notes/descriptions in () so they don't get confused with the dialogue. Other than that, bravo! Where's the rest???

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Bad fic? <Looks around> What bad fic? This was great! I do have to echo Dain Of the Iron Hills comment about putting scenes in [ ] or ( ).

dave.

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