(fanfic) "The Way The South Park Was Won!" Part 2

Oct 12, 1998, 2:21 AM ET11 posts by 10 posters
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Kyle Broslofski

OK! I hope this is good! :) <please don't suck, please don't suck, please don't suck!>

If it sucks, I'll rewrite it.

This is the finale.

<crosses fingers, toes, spleen, and pancreas>

<insert legal crap here>

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[Western music]

Announcer: [in Western accent] Last time we were a'talkin, hombre Pip challenged Eric Cartman to a showdown. Pip wants to win Sheila over. The duel will take place at High Noon.

Sheila: [offscreen] Please don't use the accent.

[View of South Park. It now looks like a Western town in the desert. Tumbleweeds blow by. Vultures screech from overhead. The main street place now has a boardwalk thingy with a saloon. Horses and water troughs are at various places around the building]

[A man comes out of his house]

Man: Damn! This is one hell of a drought here! Never seen anything like it before in South Park. That <bleep>ing rain better hurry up!

[Inside saloon. All the boys are dressed as cowboys. The girls are in those weird puffy, lacy dresses]

[Sheila is screeching]

Sheila: WHAT?!? THIS IS AN OUTRAGE!!! Absolutely *INSANE*!!!!!!

Stan: [in Western accent] Yeah, dude! I know! The town seems...different...somehow. I'm not sure why or how. And, where's fatass? And that French kid? It's almost high noon.

Sheila: NONONO! Well, I'm not talking about the town. I'M TALKING ABOUT THE <BLEEP>ING WARDROBE! I LOOK LIKE A WHORE! And these *SHOES*!!! What the hell are they? Stilettos? They're killing my feet! Seriously, I'm pissed off!

Kenny: {I don't know. I like what you're wearing...}

Sheila: WHAT?!?

[Kenny laughs]

Sheila: Well, *ANYWAY*, do *any* of you know what the hell is going on? *Why* is there gonna be a duel? I just don't get it!

Stan: We could tell you, but then fatass would kill us.

Sheila: Oy! I don't see why this whole thing is a big secret from me, anyway! It's all a big conspiracy, isn't it? AND DON'T CALL CARTMAN "FATASS"! HE'S *NOT FAT*!!!!! I think he's buff and sexy!

Stan: All right, Sheila. You're scaring me, dude!

Kyle: [laughing] Dude, Sheila! Are you *blind* or something? Cartman is the fattest <bleep>ing person on the planet! The circumference of that kid far outmeasures that of the Earth!

Sheila: [quietly] Kyle, give me your shoes.

Kyle: What? Why?

Sheila:  Just....give.....me.....the....*SHOES*!!!

Kyle: Holy shit! OK!

[Kyle hands Sheila his shoes. Sheila takes off her shoes and puts on Kyle's shoes]

Sheila: Aha! *That's* better!

Kyle: Sheila! Now I don't have any shoes! What the hell are you doing?

Sheila: Oh, you can just wear these!

[Sheila gives Kyle the stilettos]

Kyle: SHEILA!

Sheila: You asked for it when you insulted Cartman. I won't stand for it! So, now you must suffer. SO PUT ON THE <BLEEP>ING STILETTOS! Or else I'll shove one of those extremely sharp and dangerous shoes up your ass!

Kyle: You bi-

Sheila: [cutting him off] Watch it, Kyle! You don't wanna end up wearing one of these whore dresses, do you? You know, I think it would look perfect with the shoes. And, if I do say so myself, the colors are *definitely* you!

[Kyle, pissed off, puts on the stilettos]

Stan: [in Western accent] Dude! Ah'm a'wonderin as to what's gonna be a'happenin at the showdown at haah nooon!

Sheila: Please, Stan, no one can understand you with that damn accent.

Stan: Sorry. It was like a reflex or something. Today just seems to be one of those days.

Sheila: Yeah, you gotta admit, South Park seems a bit weirder than usual!

[Pan around saloon--all the South Park people are in their Western outfits, playing poker, and all that other Western stuff, etc.]

Kyle: Tell me about it! It seems like something right out of the movies.

Kenny: {Or something out of the mind of an extremely <bleep>ed up fanfic writer!}

Sheila: Well, I'm gonna go talk to Wendy. I gotta see if she's had any luck with finding the mushroom that she was looking for.

[Silence. Sheila exits]

Stan: Dude! It's almost noon! Where on earth are Cartman and Pip?

[As if on cue, you can hear someone approaching with the noise of those boot spur thingies. The tables in the saloon and the ground start shaking with each approaching step]

Clyde: [looks at glass of water--the water is doing that rippling thing] [shouting] Oh my God! The T-Rex has broken out of its pen!

[some kids screech]

Kyle: Nah! It's just Durango Fatass.

[Laughter]

[We now pan to a shot of the swinging doors of the saloon entrance. Cartman kicks them open, as in those Western movies. The doors swing back at him, and he's knocked down. We hear a splash--implying he landed in a water trough]

Cartman: [offscreen] Awww, *WEAK*!!!

[We hear him climb out of the water trough after a bit of struggling, then we hear a squish]

Cartman: [still offscreen] EEEEWWWW!!!!! HORSE SHIT!!!!!! These stupid hippie freaks don't even know what a pooper scooper is.

[Cartman finally enters the saloon. He, too, is dressed as a cowboy. He's trying his best to imitate a cowboy walk]

Cartman: [in Western accent] Howdy, y'all! [tilts hat, chews on bubble gum as he talks, and occasionally spits] Any of y'all been a'seeing if ole Pip has been a'comin roun'? Or did the ole bastard turn yeller?

Stan: Dude! There is something seriously wrong with you!

Kyle: He's Durango Fatass. What do you expect?

Cartman: AY! Screw yah gaaaahhhhs! I'm a'gonna mosey mysef on home!

[Sheila re-enters]

Sheila: Dude, Cartman! There ya are!

Cartman: How's mah purdy l'il tomato doin'?

Sheila: Tomato? Ooohh! I get it! It's a vegetable thing, isn't it? Like the avocado!

Kyle: What on earth is this thing about the avocados, anyway?

Sheila: I'm just trying to find it, that's all. Same way that Wendy's trying to find a mushroom and Bebe's trying to find an artichoke.

[Kenny laughs hysterically]

Kyle: Whatever.

Sheila: Cartman, can you tell me *why* you and Pip are gonna fight?

Cartman: Umm, well...

[Before he can say anything else, the doors of the saloon swing open. A hush comes over all the people in the saloon. Pip enters. He's dressed all in black, as a cowboy of course, and his hat is a bit too big for him]

Clyde: [hushed] It's Desperado Pip!

Everyone: [in awe] Desperado Pip!

[Bad guy music--Dum, Dum, DUMM!!!!]

Pip: Oh...oh dear me! [thinking] Uh oh. Whatever shall I do? This doesn't look too good for me!

[Cartman approaches Pip, with the cowboy walk]

Cartman: Yer gonna be sorry, for interferin'!

[Clyde enters, from outside]

Clyde: I can't see my shadow. That only means one thing.

Everyone: [hushed] High Noon!

Sheila: Will someone *please* tell me *why* there's gonna be a showdown?

[We hear bells start to ring]

Stan: It's time for the showdown.

[Everyone steps outside. Cartman and Pip stand about twenty feet apart in the middle of the road. Everyone else is on the boardwalk thing, looking on]

[Shot of sun. Vultures are shown flying around it. The air does that wavering-from- the-heat thing. Tumbleweeds blow by. One really big tumbleweed rolls really fast, toward Kenny, who doesn't notice it. He gets tangled up in it, and it chokes him]

Kenny: {NOOOOOOO!!!!}

[Dies]

Stan: Oh my God! They killed Kenny!

Kyle: You bastards!

Sheila: And schmegagies!

Kyle: WHAT?!? WHAT IS THIS SCHMEGAGY THING ALREADY?

Sheila: I don't know, dude. I just don't know. It is a power that far transcends our knowledge.

[Vultures come down and take away Kenny]

[Attention gets turned back to Cartman and Pip]

[The camera does that panning thing when it starts at the feet, and gives a full-length view of the duelers]

Sheila: [as view of Cartman is shown] Cartman is *sexy*!

Kyle: Sheila! Shut up! You're sick, ya know that?

Sheila: [sing-songy] Kyle's wearing stilettos! Kyle's wearing stilettos!

[Everyone looks at Kyle's feet, and laughs]

Kyle: You're gonna pay!

[Attention back to duel]

[Close up on Cartman's eyes. He narrows them. Close up on Pip's eyes. They look scared]

[Their hands are poised above their Super Soaker Squirt Guns]

Clyde: On the count of 10, you'll draw!

Clyde: 10

Clyde: 9

Clyde: 8

[Pip looks around nervously]

Clyde: 7

Clyde: 6

Clyde: 5

Cartman: You're gonna die for trying to steal my girlfriend, you French schmegagy!

Clyde: 4

Clyde: 3

Sheila: HUH?

Clyde: 2

Clyde: 1

[A vulture overhead poops on Cartman's head]

Cartman: Aww, goddammit!

[Cartman tries to wipe poop off his head]

Clyde: And, *draw*!

Pip: AAAAHHHH!!!!

[Pip draws out squirt gun, and shoots Cartman, before Cartman knows what happened]

Cartman:  He...He...got...me...AAAHHH!  Can't...live...much...longer....

[Cartman teeters on one foot and falls over]

[Everyone gasps]

Pip: Oh, I did it! I DID IT! Oh, glorious day! Oh, I have won the love of Sheila!

Sheila: My aunt said it best when she said: WHAT, WHAT, *WHAT*?!?!? What on *earth* is that schmegagy talking about?

Pip: Oh, Eric saw a love letter I wrote to you, and he got mad that I was trying to steal you. He didn't believe me that you really liked me, and wanted to leave him for me. So, I challenged him to a duel, so I can win your love and prove that I really like you, and that I'm the one for you.

Sheila: [shocked] YOU...YOU...Oh, never mind that now! WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO CARTMAN?!?!?

[Sheila kneels down by Cartman]

Sheila: Cartman?

[Cartman opens his eyes]

Cartman: I..I'm sorry...He won. If you like him, then I guess that's it...

Sheila: What?!? NO! No way! I love *you*, Cartman! I'd *never* leave you! I don't know why the hell that French kid was misleading you like that! But, he's lying here!

Pip: But, you helped me with my math problems! You were *nice* to me! And, you called me a schmegagy!

Sheila: I *happened* to be in a strange mood! And, do you even know what a schmegagy *is*?

Pip: No. What is it?

Sheila: I...I don't know. But what I *do* know is that you were totally talking bullshit, and you totally freaked out Cartman!

Pip: I..I'm sorry. I thought you really did like me!

Sheila: I *don't* like you! Well, sometimes I may be slightly tolerating of you, but I'm *not* in love with you! Get that through your croissant head right now!

Cartman: Dude, Sheila! I'm so sorry about the misunderstanding. I'm really so-

[He doesn't get a chance to finish his sentence. Sheila smooches him]

[After a bit]

Kyle: Eeeww! Would you two be kind enough to cut it out *SOMETIME THIS YEAR*?!?!

Sheila: YOU STUPID SCHMEGAGY! YOU'RE PISSING ME OFF HERE!

[Sheila and Cartman stand up. Cartman takes off cowboy hat and jacket. He's wearing his normal outfit]

Pip: [grasping for threads] Sheila, aren't you even a *little* bit impressed? Don't you even like me one little bit?

Sheila: You know, I may be, just a bit.

Everyone: HUH?

Pip: [eyes widen] *REALLY*?!?

Sheila: Yeah, it just so totally amazes me that someone can be such a STUPID ASSHOLE SCHMEGAGY! GO BUY YOURSELF A <BLEEP>ING PINWHEEL!

Pip: Right-o! Oh, dear, now how many can I buy if they're $.25 apiece and I have $50?

Sheila: Damn you, you math failure! I spend all my time tutoring you, and now you *FORGET EVERYTHING*??? DIE, YOU SCHMEGAGY BASTARD!!!!!!

[Sheila whacks Pip over the head with a literal avocado]

Pip: [sighs] Love hurts!

[END]
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Well? Should I rewrite it (i.e. does it suck?) Or, was it <gasp> good? <hopes it was good! :)> COMMENTS, CRITICISMS, ETC. *PLEASE*!!!!

~Kyle Broslofski~

I liked it! its just what I need this early. :) I love Sheila, she is awsome!

Ashley WaP (Weird and Proud) "This love will open our world

you've outdone everyone. I kept wanting to turn on the TV and see it there. Wow, excuse me while I kneel and worship at your feel :) -me

<snip KICK ASS fic>

NO DON'T REWRITE NEVER IT IS TO GOOD TO REWRITE>

-Dan

OK! I hope this is good! :) <please don't suck, please don't suck,

In article , [email] wrote:

No, it kicked ass. Um... it was time to kick ass and chew bubblegum, and your fic was all out of gum. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to drink a cup of coffee with a very unhealthy level of caffeine and write the second part of that Terrance and Philip thing I was working on. Terrance is aboot to ruin his colon in a violent farting accident. Stay tuned!

Martin "I listened to Black Sabbath at 78 speed... I saw God, man." --Tommy Chong (Remove kill_all_the_spammers to reply)

Love it, girl, love it! Keep writing and *never stop*! Oh, and thanks for the idea, I'll write it, trust me.

-Kim (there are other stories to be written..)

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yeah..damn it, I wanna know what happens to me!

Ashley WaP (Weird and Proud) "This love will open our world

In article , [email] wrote:

Tsk, tsk. Such a negative attitude does not do good for one's self-confidence or their horse riding ability, kemosabe.

Great fanfic as always. You know, just the other day down main street, two people had a duel. It was interrupted when the cops* threw 'em in jail, though :).

*All two of them.

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well, of course it was good! all your fanfics are. loved the build up, and the ending had just tyhe right amount of cliche in it. don't rewrite it. i'm just sad it didn't last longer. oh well <sob><sob>, i'll just wait till another great fanfic appears. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - if you talk to god, you are praying; if god talks to you, you have schizophrenia (Thomas Szasz)

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In article , Kyle Broslofski writes

WOW! Great 'fic Kyle. Your stuff just keeps getitng better. The 'schmegagy' or however you say it joke was well worked and well it rocks! And with that I shall retire into my little hole and finish Psychomania Part 2....

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