(fanfic) "The Way The South Park Was Won!" Part 1.

Oct 10, 1998, 12:06 AM ET20 posts by 13 posters
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Kyle Broslofski

Okeedokee. This is gonna be sort of a take-off on Wild West movies, so it's prolly a bit different. And, it kind of centers around Pip. I hope y'all like it! :)

The first part prolly is a bit blar, but it does get better--it's background info, as most of the first parts of my fanfics are.

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[Boy's Locker Room. It is before gym class. The boys are tying their shoes]

Cartman: Hey! Where's Sheila?

Kyle: What do you mean, "Where's Sheila?"

Cartman: AY! What do you *think* I mean? I ask, "Where's Sheila?" and I really mean, "Can you buy some ham for me?" of course. That totally makes sense! You braindead hippies are all on crack, that I swear! Well, where is she? She usually comes in here before gym class, looking for an avocado.

Stan: Dude! Why would Sheila come in here looking for an avocado?

Kyle: I don't know. She's Sheila. She's just psychotic that way.

Kenny: {I don't think she was really looking for an avocado...}

Kyle: Dude! What are you talking about?

Kenny: {Ask Cartman}

[Kenny laughs]

Cartman: AY! WOULD SOMEONE ANSWER MY QUESTION!?!? I'M GETTING PISSED OFF HERE!

Kyle: Dude! Don't you remember? She has to help Pip with reviewing for that math test.

Stan: Dude! I pity her!

[In classroom]

[Sheila is writing a word problem on the blackboard. Pip is staring at the blackboard]

Pip: Oh, dear! These word problems are so confusing!

Sheila: No they're not! It's just basic math. You just gotta figure out an equation for the numbers.

Pip: Oh, dear! I'm hopeless!

Sheila: No, no, no! You're gonna understand these bastards, or else my name isn't Sheila Broslofski!

Sheila: [thinking] Oh, well. I guess this is my good deed of the century. I wouldn't normally be so *tolerating*, but I'm just in a rare mood today, since tonight is my big date with Cartman! So, I guess I'll put up with the French kid for a bit. It wouldn't hurt to help the kid with these word problems.

Sheila: OK. If Bob has $100, and he sees 15 plants he wants to buy, and each individual plant costs $5, how much change will Bob get?

Pip: [writing frantically on a piece of paper] Umm, $300?

Sheila: Erm, nope! OK, how about this one? Bubba has $10.00, since he got drunk last night and blew his money buying a pair of platform shoes, a miniskirt, and dyed his hair since he thinks he's Cyndi Lauper because he's drunk. Bubba now wants to go to a dime store and buy $10.00 worth of those little gummy hats, which cost $.10 apiece. How many little gummy hats can he buy for $10.00?

Pip: Erm, 237?

Sheila: No. Oh-*KAY*! *AHA*! I got it! OK, Pip, listen up dude! Now, *this* problem you had better get right! OK....hmm...Pip has $50. Sheila tells Pip to go buy as many pinwheels as he can buy with his $50. Since pinwheels cost $.25 apiece, how many pinwheels can Pip buy?

Pip: 200!

Sheila: All right! You got it now! Ok, just think of everything in terms of pinwheels, and you'll do just fine!

Pip: Thank you, Sheila!

Sheila: Oh, don't mention it!

Pip: [thinking] Oh, glorious day! Glorious, glorious day! Not only do I finally understand these dreadful word problems, but I do believe Sheila may feel the same way about me as I do about her! For so long, I have admired her! But, no one has known this. And, today she was being really nice to me, so I think she may actually *like* me! She might even give up Eric for *me*! Oh, *glorious* day! I wonder what she's thinking right now? Thinking about *me*?

Sheila: [thinking] Why do bananas get all weird if you put them in a refrigerator? Are Boston cream pies really from Boston? What would happen if you shoved a balloon up your nose? Would your head expand? Explode? What? What is SPAM made out of? What does it all mean? Supposedly Poisoned Artificial Meat? Will the trolls ever <bleep> off and leave alt.tv.southpark alone?

Pip: [thinking] Oh, yes! I do really think that she's thinking about me!

Sheila: Bye, Pip! Now, I gotta go find that avocado!

Pip: Sheila, wait a minute!

Sheila: Yeah?

Pip: Oh, I...I...I, umm...I mean, do you...Would you...I mean, I really like you. [hugs Sheila]

Sheila: AAAHH! Egad! You...you *SCHMEGAGY*! Go buy yourself a pinwheel!

Pip: [smiling] Right-o!

[Pip leaves classroom]

Pip: [thinking] She *does* like me? But, what's a schmegagy?

Sheila: [thinking] Schmegagy? What on *earth* is a schmegagy?

[note from author--What is a schmegagy?]

[At lunchtime. Wendy and Sheila are eating lunch together]

Sheila: ...so, then he hugged me! Oy! Why *me*?

Wendy: You don't *like* Pip, do you?

[Sheila bursts into laughter]

Sheila: No! Wendy, don't think through your ass!

Wendy: I'm not. I was thinking maybe you finally saw the truth about Cartman. Even *Pip* is better than *Cartman*!

Sheila: Wendy, you're my best friend. What are you saying here?

Wendy: Nothing. [thinking] I don't wanna get her started on one of her defending of Cartman rants. She'd still be screeching ten days from now.

Sheila: Ok, that's good. I just thought I heard you suggest that I should dump Cartman for *PIP*! If you would have said that, I would have been concerned as to if you're on something, hit your head several thousand times off the wall, or just finally snapped. But, promise me this, Wendy. Not a *word* of this to anyone at all! Other people may misinterpret and then I'll be stuck in one <bleep>ed up mess, and then I'll be pissed off, and I'll be forced to cut out your brain.

Wendy: Ok, Sheila. Not a word.

[Cut to Pip, who's sitting at a table in the cafeteria all alone]

Pip: [talking to himself] Oh, she likes me! She *likes* me! But, what am I supposed to do? How do I get Eric to back off? Oh dear, Pip! You shouldn't be planning on standing up for yourself in any way. That will get you into trouble. But, I really like her! And, Eric really isn't a very nice person. He doesn't deserve Sheila. Oh, what a terrible dilemma! What am I supposed to do?

[Recess--after lunch]

[Pip is shown writing a letter. He is repeating what he is writing to himself]

Pip: My dearest Estella, umm, I mean *Sheila*! I really like you, and I have admired you for a very long time now. I really hope you find it in your heart to return the sentiments, as I know you really like me too. Please choose me over Eric. I feel that he isn't nice enough for you. Love, Phillip.

[Some older kids that don't have names come over and start beating up Pip for no reason]

Pip: Ouch! Oh my!

[A gust of wind blows the letter across the playground]

[Pip is still being beat up, so he doesn't see this]

[Stan, across the playground from Pip, along with Kyle, Cartman, and Kenny, sees the letter and picks it up. He reads it]

Stan: Dude! This is seriously <bleep>ed up here!

Kyle: Dude! What's that?

Stan: It's a love letter! And, you wouldn't *believe* what it says!

Kyle: Let me see!

[Stan hands the letter to Kyle]

Kyle: [reading letter] *DUDE*!

Cartman: What? What is it?

Stan: Should we show him?

Cartman: Yes! Show Cartman! Show Cartman!

Kenny: {Show *WHAT* to Cartman?}

[Kenny laughs]

Kyle: The *letter*, Kenny. Get your mind out of that gutter! Do you think we really should show him that letter?

Cartman: AY! Don't speak about me as if I wasn't here! YOU'RE PISSING ME OFF, YOU SCHMEGAGIES!

Stan: Dude! What's a schmegagy?

Cartman: It's a...Oh, goddammit!

Kyle: OK, dude, here's the letter. If you decide to go on a homicidal killing spree, just make sure you wait until we get out of the area.

[Kyle hands Cartman the letter]

Cartman: Who's Estella?

Kyle: Dur, fatass! It's *SHEILA*! Estella is crossed out! It says *Sheila*! As in my cousin!

Cartman: Oh... [continues reading the letter]

Stan: Oh, shit! I really don't think you should have let him see that.

[Cartman's eyes go all pinwheely. He whines and screeches]

Cartman: THAT SON OF A BITCH! TRYING TO STEAL MY GIRLFRIEND! THAT STUPID BASTARD SON OF A BITCH! THAT ASSHOLE! THAT...THAT...umm, who's Phillip, anyway?

Kyle: Phillip is Pip.

Cartman: THAT FRENCH PANSY!?!?! OH *NO*!!! OVER MY DEAD BODY! HE'S GONNA *DIE*!

Stan: Now I *really* think you shouldn't have given him this letter!

Cartman: [screeching] PIP! GET YOUR STUPID FRENCH ASS OVER HERE!

[Pip climbs out from inside a trashcan--obviously put there by those kids who were beating him up. Pip approaches Cartman and the other kids]

Pip: Yes, Eric?

Cartman: Does this look familiar to you, you schmegagy?

[Cartman hands Pip the letter]

Pip: Oh, I was just...

Cartman: TRYING TO STEAL SHEILA FROM ME! I DON'T TAKE THIS KIND OF SHIT! I DON'T! IF SOMEONE MARCHES ON IN HERE AND TRIES TO PUT A LUMP OF GREEN JELLO IN MY SANDBOX...

Stan: What?!?

Pip: I wasn't trying to steal Sheila from you. She really likes me! She's leaving you on her own.

Stan: [to Kyle] Dude! Is he for real? Is Sheila really interested in Pip?

Kyle: No, she's still crazy about fatass. Pip is just a delusional <bleep>ed up weirdass French croissant.

Cartman: No! NONONONONO! [throws a hissy tantrum] You're making it up.

Pip: And, I think it's about time she dumps you. You're an obnoxious jerk, and you don't deserve her at all. You're one of the meanest kids I have ever met. In fact, I think you are quite the poo-poo. And, I think I should prove how much I like her by defeating you in a battle of courage and nobility.

Cartman: A what?

Pip: We'll have a showdown. A duel.

Cartman: All right then! If you're going to try to steal Sheila from me, then I'm gonna kick your ass! No one, and I mean *NO ONE* screws around like this and gets away with it. I can get pretty defensive when some stupid asshole tries to screw around and steal *MY* girlfriend. YOU'RE GONNA DIE YOU STUPID BASTARD FREAK!

[Cartman farts at Pip]

Cartman: I'll kick you in the nuts!

[Sheila and Wendy enter]

Sheila: And, what's going on here?

Cartman: [quickly] Nothing.

[Cartman glares at Pip. Pip is staring, with a silly grin, at Sheila. Cartman looks even more pissed off]

Sheila: I really think something is...

[Sheila doesn't get a chance to finish her sentence. Cartman gives Pip the evil eye, then Cartman smooches Sheila]

Sheila: *DUDE*!

Cartman: Stupid French *VEENERSCHNITZELS*! They are *ASSHOLES*! They are *WRONG*! Told ya so! And, the stupid French bastard is gonna die soon!

Sheila: Cartman? What are you talking about?

Pip: [thinking] Oh, what have I gotten myself into this time?

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It sucked, eh?

Comments, criticisms, etc. *ALWAYS* welcome please!

~Kyle Broslofski~

Sucked my ass. I like the way you stop focusing so much on Stan and Kyle!! How's Kenny gonna die. BTW, I haven't read your fanfics b4 but I like sheila! Where's PART 2!! -me

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|Sucked my ass.

Kinky.

Gaz Kelly (_*_) blackbessSPLAThotmailPLOPcom http://www.geocities.com/WestHollywood/Village/1408 Butt-head: "I heard Ozzy bit a cow's head off once." Beavis: "Yeah, and milk came out of its neck!"

In article , [email] wrote:

(snip)

A schmegagy is a small piece of clam-flavored cheesecake. Schmegagies contain no artificial coloring or preserative, and are rich in vitamins A, B3 and B12. If exposed to the environment, a schmegagy will dry out, so always keep your schmegagy in a hermetically sealed, pressure-controlled, titanium-plated, llama resistant vault.

No, your best yet. Although your ignorance about schmegagies troubles me :)

Martin "Do you really think the Tooth Fairy will believe your mouth had 300 teeth in it?" --Hobbes
Kyle BroslofskiMartin Hazelbower

Whoa, cool! Thanks for letting me know--I've been wondering what a schmegagy was for a few years now--ever since I heard someone screech about their schmegagy one day when I was at the mall. It mystified me ever since! :)

Whoa, *REALLY*!?!?

Although your ignorance about schmegagies troubles me :)

Ahh! But, now I am enlightened! :)

~Kyle Broslofski~

You're great, Kyle..hell no it didn't suck! It was awesome! Nothing you've written has *ever* sucked! FINISH IT!

-Kim (sounding like her fans for McCormick..which is done after one scene she promised Lindsay would help her with! And Ashley and Lindsay both say it kicks ass, I hope it does..I'm rambling, but everyone can cheer at the news now!)

AshReadGUMPELS

its REALLY good... *sniff* (and not just becuase of the damn speech we're writing for the other story) Get it posted!

Ash WaP (Weird and Proud) "This love will open our world

AlyssaGUMPELS

GUMPELS wrote in article ...

you've

she

kicks

now!)

<scream> AAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

<twitch> <twitch>

McCormick! McCormick! McCormick! Postpostpost! I've been waiting sooo long for McCormick's conclusion, post *now* before I suffer a stroke or a heart attack or something (I have high blood pressure...you don't want a fan dying, do you? postpostpost!)

Alyssa, spazzing just a tad bit here

GUMPELSAlyssa

<snip long rant>

Alyssa, you've always been my main inspiration for finishing this thing, and you've made me try to do it today..I'm going to try and see if Linds is awake so we can write the scene over the phone..if not, screw it, this thing is almost done, I'm writing that scene *now*!

-Kim (I'm going to post it tonight, one thing or another "Music. What a wonderful thing that while our government is collapsing and our economy is crumbling and people are dying everywhere, we can all gather together here and say 'Hey, Will Smith is wearing great pants tonight!'"-Trey Parker

AlyssaGUMPELS

Really? Cool...

Woohoohoo!

Woohoohoohoohoohoo! <g> Can't wait!

and

gather

tonight!'"-Trey

<giggling at Trey>

Lyssie

Kyle BroslofskiGUMPELS

*WOW*!!!! *REALLY*?!? <sniff, sniff> I don't suck! :) Yeah!

~Kyle Broslofski~

<cheers> Even though I've already read it and replied to it!!!

cyberwolfGyrex Derision

OH MY GOD! I MISSED THIS FIC!!! PLEASE EMAIL IT TO ME! THANKS!

Cyberwolf [email]

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Kyle BroslofskiGyrex Derision
*WOW*!

You outdid yourself this time, Kyle.

Uh-oh! Now will I be able to outdo my outdid self?!? ;) (Erm, *WHAT* am I talking about here?!?!)

We want part 2!!!

It'll be out most likely tomorrow (Monday). Today I was just *SO* busy--tutoring a friend with Chemistry, work, cooking traditional Native American food for a school project, and other bits of absolutely normal chaos!)

~Kyle Broslofski~

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    That was AWSOME! ! !  This looks to be your best fic EVER!
    Cartman vs. Pip.  The next big pay-per-view event of the decade!

dave. P.S: Glad your kickin' ass in school. :)

it was cool, one question though: what's a schmegagy? :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - if you talk to god, you are praying; if god talks to you, you have schizophrenia (Thomas Szasz)

remember as you're walking down the road of life... hitchhike, its faster! (Bart Simpson)

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In article , [email] wrote:

A schmegagy (correctly spelled 'shengage' [sh - ehn - gahge]) is the part of a song played on the guitar (almost always at the end, almost always acoustic) when the guitar player lets go of the neck and does one final stroke on the guitar. Think end of 'Good Riddance' by Green Day. Duuhhhlun.

No, not at all. Mymymy, this negative attitude will get you *nowhere*!

Oh, and I just made up that 'schmegagy' crap. I have no idea *what* a schmegagy is. :) the_davester - > dgisoft @ softhome.net Visit my website, yadda yadda yadda... http://www.geocities.com/~dgisoft/nirvana/ Proudly Daving one Dave a Dav- err... day -- Meee! "So make the best of this test and don't ask why- It's not a question but a lesson learned in time. It's something unpredictable, but in the end is right I hope you had the time of your life."

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[znipples]

Must...resist...urge...to...strangle Kyle...for...ripping on her fanfics!!

Kyle, I do believe you have a case of 'SnowCalicoitis' (no offense, Snowy), which causes you to hate your fanfics, even though they rock muchly. Take two compliments and call me in the morning.

Alyssa

Kyle BroslofskiAlyssa

EEEKK! ;)

Woohoo! It was *good*?!? Yeah! <happy>

Oh, you see, I have a weirdass system of writing--I write blindly--I'm not aware of what exactly I'm writing--I just sorta write like crazy, post it (with a warning that it may suck), worry, then read it a few weeks later and actually like it! Or, I read it after I get good reviews, then I'm all like, "Whoa, dude!" The same thing happened with my first creative writing assignment for school--I was all like, "Damn this thing is gonna suck! The teachers are gonna hate it, the kids are all gonna make fun of me, I'm gonna fall into a pit of darkness and die!" after this *5 page typed* long thing was written in 45 minutes or less flat, in one of my creative crazes. But, *after* my teacher told me she read part of it and was looking forward to reading the rest, got great reviews from my proofreading partner dude, my story was chosen as one of the best (and read out loud in class, even though it sorta took up half the classtime, as it was so long), the kids in my class *LAUGHED OUT LOUD* at the funny bits and complimented the story even though kids are braindead in the morning(stories are read out loud in class, without names given, so not many knew it was mine), *AND* my teacher asked me to submit my story for possible publication, I knew it actually wasn't that bad! ;) I just have a really screwed up system. And, I just always put in a warning that it may suck, just in case. I just never really know...

Excuse my ramblings.

~Kyle "I talk *WAY* too much!" Broslofski~