Alone

Nov 7, 199814 posts by 8 posters
14 posts
Alyssa

Be warned, people. Our dear Kimmie has written a REALLY depressing one. This one nearly had me crying, and I've said it before and I'll say it again - it's *hard* to make me cry. It rocks, though, so onto the story!

Alone by Kim

They were cold slabs of marble, each cracked and faded, a few letters on the epitaphs blurred beyond recognition. He didn't care. He had memorized each one. Names and dates were all that were there to preserve the memory of his friends, his friends since birth and his friends until death. Death. That word had never been so final to him before, so destroying and dark and empty. It was as if he had known the definition for the first time. The first grave..nobody had cared. He was scorned until death, a prejudiced idiot, and overweight to boot. Truely a momma's boy, he had never known responsibility, or grief, and his only unhappiness was that his social life that never seemed to lie in favor of him. The mourner couldn't help but pity him. Sharing the grave was the one person who *had* cared for him. What she had seen in him nobody ever knew. Maybe she could get to what was underneath, find something within him that was much more pleasant. Now the reason she loved him would always remain a mystery. The next grave, too, was shared by a couple. He seemed to be the leader, the jock, the reasonable one. She was the smart one, the open-minded one, the girl everyone should have fallen in love with. Only he had. After a long, happy marriage, they had met with death of old age, like the first couple. The third grave was owned by a man who had always stayed a bachelor, though hardly a virgin. He had always been a bit more the nervous sort, paranoid, even. After long disagreements with his parents as a teenager, he had left their town to start a new life with his new dreams. When he met with his end, his will had said he wanted to be buried here, with the others. Here. This place, just as faded as the gravestones. The sign needed to be replaced. After so many years, the bus stop still needed a bench. The only places to sit were the tops of the gravestones, the four of them sitting in a neat row. Four. For there was the last grave. The grave that held no corpse. The grave would never hold a corpse. For it was his grave. The mourner turned sharply, feeling a hand on his shoulder. "Are you ok?" He sighed. It was just her. "Do I *look* ok?" "It's hard. It was hard for me. It still is," she said, as if that would help. "Even after all these years.." "We grew up with them. We lived with them. And though our bodies are living, our hearts died with them." They silently read the epitaphs once more.

ERIC AND SHEILA CARTMAN STAN AND WENDY MARSH KYLE BROFLOFSKI

"We'll never join them, you know. Never," he whispered. "That pact we made with them, to have all of us buried here, it was useless." "I know. At least we have each other." She put her arm around him, a comforting gesture. "If we didn't, I don't know what I'd do." He kissed her, softly. "We should be there. With them. We should be dead, we *should* have been, years ago." "But we can't be." "Right." He swallowed the lump forming in his throat, and stared at the last grave. It wasn't just his grave, it was *their* grave. The grave that held no corpse, and would never hold a corpse.

KENNY AND LENNI MCCORMICK

As the couple stood there, at the bus stop where the boys had waited for the same bus, with the same driver, for years and years, they knew that there was only one hope, and that was each other. For without each other, they would be truely alone.

Remember, KIM wrote this. Compliment KIM. KIM. Not me.

Alyssa

ZoeHerisAlyssa

Thankee, 'Lyssie..and now, just send me the prologue to 'Oblivion' (aka Amnesiafic) and I'll have some nice updates for you.

-Kim (my, this is THE STORY all over again..)

AlyssaZoeHeris

It be sent, Kim. Get yes updates!

Alyssa: (who can see Lenni wallowing in depression, while remembering certain choice lines from the prologue...)

Ds2587spAlyssa

Why didn't KIM post this herself. And I am suffering a memory lapse which one was Kim. She was the one who wrote Mcormic right?

Yeah, ds, I wrote McCormick and Alone (did you like it?), and the reason I didn't post it last night was because I was too goddamn lazy, so Alyssa did me a *big* favor and posted her copy. (Thank you, 'Lyssie!)

-KIM (I thought my name would be a little easier to remember, no offense or anything)

kim, why'd you change your nick-name, i'm seriously getting confused here!

On 7 Nov 1998 15:45:04 GMT, [email] (ZoeHeris) wrote:

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if you talk to god, you are praying;
if god talks to you, you have schizophrenia (Thomas Szasz)

remember as you're walking down the road of life... hitchhike, its faster! (Bart Simpson)

[email] remove idontwantspam to reply

Let me explain it again... I have 2 accounts, since my entire family loves the computer. The other one (ZoeHeris) is currently down. This is my original name, GUMPELS.

-Kim (hoping it all makes sense now)

GUMPELS writes this bit...

Oh, right I getcha! GUMPELS? wyrd name...hey I'm about ta change my name by gettin' a hotmail thingie here's my new name; [email].(it's not up yet...hope there're enough letters for my FUNKY name!<grins>

new-SPANDEX chile "I live in fear!"

<sad fic snipped>

Very touching and very sad. One would never think that immortality had such a high price.

dave.

Thankee, Dave, glad you liked it..I'm hoping for more replies <hint hint>

-Kim (the things I write when I'm bored..)

Kyle BroslofskiAlyssa

<sniffies, umm, I mean, snippies>

Sniffie, sniffie! This one definitely got me crying! (Me crying, as in "Kyle Who Doesn't *EVER* Cry" crying) This was excellent! Written perfectly! :) You, Kim, are another Fanfic Fantastic! :) Your descriptions are very vividly portrayed, and your stories are all so affecting (if I'm making any sense--I *did* just drink too much coffee again)!!!!! Yeah!!! Kick ass! <passes billions of cookies>

~Kyle Broslofski~

Thanks, Kyle, thanks lots, it's always great to get compliments from awesome writers like you..hey, if I get a book someday, I'll send you a signed copy, and you do the same for me, ok?

-Kim (proud to be a Fantastic Fanfic author!)

Kyle BroslofskiGUMPELS

GUMPELS wrote:

Thanks! :) You're an awesome writer, so you'll be getting *MANY* compliments!!! :)

hey, if I get a book someday, I'll send you a signed copy,

Of course!!! I seriously am writing a book, as of now...I started it 'bout a month before I started fanfics...'course now I gotta rewrite parts of it (since at the time I was *VERY* new to writing, and it isn't as good as it should be)...I hope to have it finished before the summer...it's kind of at a standstill right now, since my job takes up too much time but I'm more than likely quitting my job (long story) so I might actually get more time. I'm gonna look into getting it published (somehow). But that may be a bit of a longshot (since overstuffy publisher types wouldn't like my story--it's *different*! ;P)

~Kyle Broslofski~

<passes more cookies>