(fanfic) Psychomania Part 3

Nov 11, 19986 posts by 5 postersalt.tv.southpark
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Here we go then, part 3 of erm at least 5!

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CARTMAN: Ay! Mister coach driver person! Are we nearly there yet?

MR GARRISON: Yeah! We ought to be there by now, look! It's going dark!

DRIVER: I think we must have taken the wrong road back in Indianapolis!

PIP: Excuse me but doesn't that sign say Houston?

MR GARRISON: HOUSTON? Who hired this useless driver?

[Driver whispers something to Mr Garrison]

Oh yes. It was me wasn't it.

DRIVER: May I suggest we find a motel and stop the night and try to get to Washington in the morning?

MR GARRISON: Sounds like the best thing to do. So where's the nearest motel then?

KYLE: Looks like there's one about 1/2 km down the road!

MR GARRISON: Ah yes. Gates Motel. We can stop here.

KYLE: Gates Motel?

[Kyle looks a bit queasy]

STAN: Yeah so? Are you alright dude?

[Kyle faints]

[Inside the reception of the motel]

[No sign of anyone so Mr Garrison rings the bell]

MR GARRISON: Oh come on you son of a bitch, just listen for the bell!

[Tall, lanky guy comes in]

MR GARRISON (sarcastic) :Oh thank the lord!

MR GATES: Yes sir, how may I help?

MR GARRISON: I'd like a room please.

MR GATES: A room?

MR GARRISON: No, a tin of picked strawberries, oh sweet Jesus, of course we want a room!

MR GATES: I would have thought you'd want more than one room for all of you?

MR GARRISON: Well of course we do, look, we'll take 10 rooms.

MR GATES: Okay, there are your keys, sorry about the wait, I was changing the bedding.

MR GARRISON: Okay children, let's get moving!

[The children walk out of the motel and on to the veranda. Kyle looks over his shoulder. There's a big house up on a hill and in one of the rooms he sees a silhouette of an old woman at the window]

KYLE: Aaaaahh!

[Kyle faints]

MR GARRISON: Kyle Broslofski, what is wrong with you today?

STAN: I think he's just feeling a little peaky.

MR GARRISON: Just get him out of the road Stanley.

[Pip walks over to Cartman]

PIP: Would you mind terribly if I shared a room with you Eric, it's just that all the other rooms are full and I have nowhere to sleep!

CARTMAN: Pip, if I was you, would you let me stay with you?

PIP: Oh yes, of course I would.

CARTMAN: No you wouldn't. Go sleep with someone else you stupid Frenchman!

PIP: Righty-ho!

[Room 1]

BEBE: I'm just going to take a shower okay Wendy?

WENDY: Sure, but make sure I get some hot water! Actually, I'm just going out, to see Stan.

BEBE: Okay, I'll see you later.

[Room 2]

STAN: I'll get it Kyle.

WENDY: Hi Stan.

STAN: Hi Wendy.

WENDY: Are you going to let me in or what?

STAN: Sure, come right in.

WENDY: Is Kyle alright after what happened earlier?

STAN: Yeah, I dunno what freaked him out though.

WENDY: Bebe's just having a shower so I thought I'd pop round and see how you were settling in.

KYLE: What! You're in Room 1 right?

WENDY: Yeah.

KYLE: Quick! We need to get her out of that shower at once!

STAN: Dude, what are you on?

KYLE: Shut up and move!

[Room 1]

WENDY: Ooops.

KYLE: Whaddya mean 'ooops'

WENDY: I left the key on my bedside table.

KYLE: You did what? Damn it. We're gonna have to break the door down. 1, 2, 3!

[Door caves in]

KYLE: Bebe!

BEBE: Who is it?

KYLE: It's Kyle.

BEBE: What are you doing in here?

KYLE: Shut up. I'll answer questions later. Just get out of the shower. Move!

[Bebe comes rushing out of the shower]

BEBE: What's going on?

STAN: Yeah, this is nuts Kyle - what's going on in that thick head of yours?

KYLE: This place is freaking me out - hang on, I've got to check something.

[Kyle walks across the room, away from the shower and takes a picture off the wall]

KYLE: Look!

STAN: What?

KYLE: Look!

[Kyle points to a tiny hole in the middle of the wall]

STAN: What is that?

KYLE: It's a spy hole. Like some people have on their doors so they can see who is knocking before they open it.

STAN: Then how did you know it was there?

KYLE: I had a gut feeling.

STAN: Pretty damn good one. And another thing, what's it doing behind a picture?

KYLE: I reckon it's time I started to explain this...

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This is turning out to be great, Mike. I've never actually seen Psycho (not yet at least, but I saw the last half of The Exorcist) it's gettin' good...

the_davester [email] ICQ: 20715884 http://www.geocities.com/~dgisoft/nirvana/ Fanfic Awards Site Coming Soon! http://pearl.montana.com/sshort/cgi-bin/fanfic.pl?voteform=1 "The last in line, Got no spine? / Being the worst of the worst Really, relly hurts / You're down in the bottom of the barrel Wearing last decade's moldy apparel / You know that it's nothing new It's just that nobody likes you" -- Last in Line, D-Sveen

haven't you already posted this before? either that or i'm having deja-vu.... whatever. its still brilliant. can't wait for the rest of it. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - if you talk to god, you are praying; if god talks to you, you have schizophrenia (Thomas Szasz)

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In article , Mr Psycho <mrpyscho@id ontwantspambigfoot.com> writes

I posted the first three parts a couple of months agao and then I got a bit stuck so I re-wrote parts of the first three and completed the rest.

:)
Mike Jakeman ICQ #17759351 1998 FANFIC AWARDS HOST mike(at)jakeman(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk