The Two Sheilas

Feb 9, 19997 posts by 6 postersalt.tv.southpark
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Reply to this plz, I need to build my confidence to finish another "top secret" fic.

dave.

South Park: The Two Sheilas

[The Broslofski house.]

Mrs. B: Come on, Sheila, we have to get a move on.

Sheila: Why do we have to go all the way to East Park to get me a stupid dress?

Mrs. B: The prices are so much better in East Park.

Sheila: But it's two hundred miles away!

Mrs. B: That's not so far. I once went to Los Angelos for a shoe sale.

Sheila: <under her breath> That crazy old bird. Dragging me all over creation for a God damn dress that I can buy downtown.

Mrs. B: What are you muttering about?

Sheila: Nothing.

Mrs. B: Good, now get ready. We're leaving in two minutes.

[In the car, driving through town.]

Sheila: Can't this bucket go any faster?

Mrs. B: I never drive over forty miles an hour. Driving is very dangerous.

Sheila: <under her breath> Only for the people coming up behind you.

[As the car leaves South Park, we see a sign reading "East Park - 200 miles. West Park - 15 miles."]

Sheila: <after seeing the sign> Why can't we go to West Park?

Mrs. B: They don't have quality items.

Sheile: <thinking> My pinwheels are quality item and I'd prove that to you, if you weren't my Aunt.

Mrs. B: Don't worry honey, the miles will fly by. Let's play a game. <a pause> How about we count out of state licence plates. Look there's one from Texas.

Sheila: <thinking> That's it, I'm in hell!

[Back at the Broslofski House.]

[Stan, Kyle, Kenny and ol' fat ass are lying on the floor in front of the TV.]

Cartman: This bites me like a rainbow.

Kyle: Do you eat paint, Cartman, is that why you're such an idiot?

[Stan, Kyle and Kenny laugh.]

Cartman: Just wait, ass lickers. When Sheila gets back, she'll rip you a new hole.

Kenny: (Kyle's mom doesn't seen the type.)

Cartman: AY! Not Kyle's bitch mom, I mean Sheila. My Sheila!

Kenny: (Has she helped you play with your fireman yet?)

Cartman: AY! I don't need any help!

[Stan, Kyle and Kenny start laughing again.]

Cartman: <while the others are laugh at him, he thinks> I wonder when Sheila is getting back.

[In the middle of no where.]

Sheila: What do you mean, the car stalled!

[Mrs. B tries to start the car again. Nothing happens.]

Mrs. B: I'm sorry, sweetie, the car won't start.

Sheila: This is just perfect. Cartman is at home. I'm stuck here. What else could go possible go wrong!?!?

Mrs. B: <thinking> This may not be the best time to tell her that I left her bag of pinwheels at home.

Sheila: What are we going to do, Aunt Sheila?

Mrs. B: We walk.

Sheila: Walk? Are you out of your mind?! It's more than a hundred miles back to South Park!

Mrs. B: Oh, honey, we're not going back to South Park. We're still going to East Park and buy you a dress.

Sheila: What have I done to deserve this!

[Flashback of every time she used a pinwheel on some one's ass. It last's for thirty minutes.]

Sheila: Wow! That was hella-long.

Mrs. B: Come on, it won't be that bad.

Sheila: <thinking> Says the crazy old lady.

[They walk ten feet and look back at the car.]

Sheila: Dammit! What happened to our car!

[The car has been stripped clean and is now resting on cinder blocks.]

Mrs. B: It doesn't hurt anything. It was broken down anyway.

Sheila; But still! It was our car!!

Mrs. B: Oh, that wasn't our car. Mrs. Cartman let me borrow hers.

Sheila: What?!

[Flashback of Cartman saying, "When I'm sixteen, my mah is giving me her car."]

Sheila: Can we at least hitch hike?

Mrs. B: No!

Sheila: But it'll take forever to walk and besides, we'll miss the sale.

Mrs. B: Oh my God! We'll miss the sale!

Sheila: <silence>

Mrs. B: <a long pause> Don't you have a line to say.

Sheila: <crossing her arms> No, I do not.

Mrs. B: Have it your way.

Sheila: Fine.

Mrs. B: Fine.

[They stand by the side of the road. Mrs. B sticks her thumb out and waits. No one stops, no one even slows down.]

Sheila: Show some leg, Aunt Sheila.

Mrs. B: What, what, what!

Sheila: Oh, you were just itching to say that, weren't you?

Mrs. B: <shrugs>

Sheila: If you show a little leg, we might get a ride.

Mrs. B: I should tell you that I haven't shaved my legs for three months.

Sheila: <shudders> Oh, gross!

Mrs. B: Do you still want me to show some leg?

Sheila: NOOOOO!!!!

Mrs. B: Well, it looks we're back to walking.

Sheila: <thinking> Screw this!

[She walks with her fingers on her temples.]

Sheila: <thinking> Eric, my love, I need your help.

[Back at the Broslofski house.]

[Ike is bouncing around the room, holding a box of Cheesy Poofs. Cartman is doing is best to chase him down.]

Cartman: AY! Get back here!

[Stan, Kyle and Kenny are laughing so hard that their faces are red and they're out of breath. Cartman suddenly stops.]

Cartman: <eyes going to pinwheels> Yes, I hear you, my sweetie-pie and I understand.

Sheila's voice: Do I hear laughing in the background?

Cartman: <eyes still pinwheels> Yes.

Sheila's voice: Are they laughing at you?

Cartman: <eyes still pinwheels> Yeppers.

Sheila's voice: Damn that Kyle! You can use my pinwheels, which Aunt Sheila left by the front door.

Cartman: <eyes still pinwheels> See you soon.

[His eyes returns to normal and he smiles.]

Cartman: <thinking> This is going to be so sweet!

[A few minutes later, Cartman leaves with Sheila's bag of pinwheels over his shoulder and we hear moaning coming from the house.]

Cartman: That was hella-cool.

[He walks down the street to Chef's house. He rings the doorbell and Chef answers the door.]

Chef: Hello, Eric. How you doing?

Cartman: Skip it! I need a lift.

Chef: I'm sorry Eric, but I have a date coming over.

Cartman: Tough.

[He digs in Sheila's bag and pulls out a hair brush.]

Cartman: God dammit, of all the . . .

[He digs in the bag again and pulls out a pinwheel.]

Cartman: Ah ha! Now listen to me, tubby, I have a loaded pinwheel and I have no idea how to use it, so you better do what I say. My girlfriend is in trouble and since I'm her boyfriend, she can boss me around and she said get my buff and sexy ass out there and save her!

Chef: Tubby? Your call me tubby?

Cartman: Look at you. You're a big giant fat ass.

Chef: That's like the pot callin' the kettle black.

Cartman: You callin' me black?

Chef: Forget it. Let's go and you better hope we get back before my date shows up or I'll . . .

Cartman: Hey, what ever. Let's roll!

[In the middle of no where, but closer to East Park.]

Mrs. B: I'm thinking of something white and cold.

Sheila: <thinking> If I'd only had a pinwheel.

Mrs. B: Can you guess what I'm thinking about?

Sheila: Are you thinking of snow?

Mrs. B: That's great, Sheila. Now I'm think of something. . .

Sheila: <thinking> My kingdom for a pinwheel!!

[On the road, in Chef's green panel station wagon.]

Cartman: What's with the shag seat covers?

Chef: Women dig them. Plus it tickles when I drive in the nude.

[In the middle on no where, but even closer to East Park. Sheila has a big rock and is currently stalking up behind Mrs. B.]

Sheila: <thinking> They'll never convict me. I'll plead temporary insomina.

[dream sequence begins. Sheila is sitting in the witness box, dressed in prison issue clothes. Sheila defense atterny is standing before her.]

Atterny: So you say you were tortured by the late Mrs. Broslofski.

Sheila: Yes! She made up stupid games and then made me play them.

Courtroom members: GASP!

Sheila: Then she started talking to me like I was her best friend and told me all her woman troubles.

Jury Foreman: <standing up from his seat> We've heard enough. WE the jury find that Mrs. Broslofski was an evil bitch and deserved to die.

[End dream sequence.]

Sheila: <thinking> Sweet!

Mrs. B: Sheila, what are you doing with that rock?

Sheila: Um, I thought it was a turtle.

Mrs. B: Well, it's not so drop it and lets keep going. Only 95 more miles to go.

Sheila: What?! We have been walking, like, forever!

Mrs. B: Well, I kind of got us lost and we've been going around in circles.

Sheila: <pointing at Mrs. Cartman's stripped car> I knew that car looked familiar!!

[In Chef's station wagon.]

Chef: So that was the time I made love to the first lady, but that paled in comparision to the time....

Cartman: Ay! I don't care!

[Cartman starts rubbing his temples.]

Cartman: <eyes going pinwheely> Eric calling Sheila, Eric calling Sheila, Eric calling Sheila.

Sheila's Voice: Hi, I'm currently out of my mind. Please leaves a messages after the screesh and I'll get back to you as soon as I'm sane again....SCREEEEECH!

Cartman: <eyes returning to normal> Ay! Goddammit!

[Middle of you know where.]

[Sheila is busy chasing Mrs. B around in circles when a tow truck pulls up. The driver gets out and watches. The tag in his shirt reads "Greasy Adams".]

Sheila: <noticing the driver> Well, don't just stand there, help me catch her so I can hit her with a big rock and plead temporary insomina.

Greasy Adams: I'm just here to haul that car in to East Park.

Mrs. B: East Park! Well what are we waiting for?!

[Two hours later. Sheila and Mrs. B are standing outside the East Park Mall.]

Sheila: Finaly!

[Twenty minutes later, after Mrs. B made Sheila try on 25 dresses.]

Sheila: What do you mean you forgot your credit cards?!?!

Mrs. B: They must be in my other purse.

Sheila: Don't you have any money at all??

Mrs. B: Oh, I don't carry any cash on long trips. Thats how people get robbed.

Sheila: <steam coming out of her ears> YOU ARE SO DEAD!!!!!

Mrs. B: Uh, oh!

[Chef's station wagon.]

Chef: Are you sure that thing is working right?

[Cartman has his eyes closed tight and is holding a pinwheel out in front of him.]

Cartman: Ay! Fer the hudredth time, I'm letting the pinwheel guide me to my Sheila. It's her pinwheel and they never fail her.

[They come up to a border station.]

Guard: Welcome to Canada.

Cartman: We're close, I can feel it.

Chef: <thinking> This is the last time I listen to a carcker.

[Afterwards.]

[The Broslofski house.]

Mrs. B: I think we all learned something today.

Kyle: I know I did.

Stan: What's that, dude?

Kyle: I learned that I like it when Sheila is on another city.

Cartman: I learned something too.

Kyle: Unlikely, but go ahead, fatass.

[Sheila gets out a . . . . large trout and slaps Kyle around with it. (IRC JOKE)]

Cartman: I learned that bribing border gaurds can get Chef into deep shit.

Sheila: Was I supposed to learn something from this?

Cartman: Not really, I was reading from the script.

Sheila: Script? What script?

[Mrs. B, Stan, Kyle, Kenny and Cartman each pulled out their scripts and showed them to Sheila. Sheila looks around for hers.]

Sheila: HEY! Where's my script!

[A script falls from the ceiling and thunks Sheila on the head.]

Sheila: <reading from the script> I've learned something today, too. I've learned that pleading temporary insomia isn't a good defense when your charged with assualting your crazy old aunt with a rock.

[Fade out.]

[Fade in again.]

[Kenny is walking home when we see a chipper/shredder that has been carelessly left turn on. Uh, oh, guess what happens next. Yep, that right. Kenny slips on a patch of ice and slides head first into the chipper/shredder. Chunks of blood stained orange parka is shot out the other end. A subtitle appears at the bottom of the screen and it reads, "Oh, my God! They killed Kenny! You bastards!"]

[Fade out again.]

Good story, but I have a question. I've read other fics that seem to have an "extra" Sheila in them, too. The only Sheila I know of on the show is Kyle's mom. Has Mephisto cloned her, or something, without my knowing it, or is there actually another character named Sheila on the show that I SOMEHOW managed to miss?

Steve Sutton (#1 Kenny fan) Springfield, GA

Nopies...she's not on the show! :) She's another Sheila...(and, copied and pasted, my complete explanation of Sheila ;P)

All You Ever Needed To Know About Sheila (and a bit you probably didn't need to know ;P):

Sheila is an original character, created by me, back in July. Why are all these other people writing about her, you may ask. Because they asked me and I give them permission. :) The reason her name is Sheila, is because her mom Lucia (who is Kyle's mom's sister) named her after Kyle's mom, since Lucia doesn't like either Sheila.

Sheila is Kyle's cousin, whom the Broslofskis had adopted, as Sheila's parents were never really around (they claimed it was scientific expeditions, but later we find out that her parents are involved with aliens and the Mafia). Sheila, in my first full fanfic, met and fell in love with Cartman (under some unusual circumstances). Pip also has a crush on Sheila, which she is NOT happy about at all. Sheila loves Cartman and ONLY Cartman! :)

Sheila, appearance-wise, is a short, blonde-haired little girl that looks like she can't do much harm at all. (if you want any pictures, I have them drawn as .jpeg's). But, actually, she's a Psycho Bitch (Psycho Bitch is her superhero identity). Sheila is (personality-wise) loud, defensive, psycho, dramatic, violent, bitchy (at times); but, she can also be NICE, too! :P She's based on me, actually! :)

Sheila has an obsession (of sorts) with pinwheels. She uses them, whenever angered by someone who is bothering either her or Cartman, to cause severe anal pain. Yes, she shoves them up people's asses. Pinwheels are little kids' toys, that look like miniature windmills--Sheila originated the use of them as weapons. She also does cool lasery things with pinwheels as well.

I think that about covers it! :)

~Kyle Broslofski~� �1999, All Rights Reserved, Void Where Prohibited, Batteries....Not Included. "Obsessive Cartman Fan...AND PROUD OF IT!!!"

Ohh, for a minute there, I thought I was losing my mind! :-)

Thanks for the info on Sheila. You're right, I definitely didn't need to know some of that. :-)

KezDave Bensonalt.tv.southpark

hey It's me....without a sig....stupid bloody freeserve(thallium_fishpie) gggggrrrrrrrr....nice fic....I'm wasting bandwidth by moaning...but t'was cools.......

Ha ha ha ha ha! Almost wet myself when I read this.

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Oh, the humanity! You just *had* to kill Kenny, didn't you Dave? Didn't you? *DIDN'T YOU?!?!?!*

<passes the ol' cookies> Great fanfic, but didja *have* to kill Kenny?! :)

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CARTMAN: That was kinda kewl!

Good fic there Dave. Keep it up! You had a couple of bits in there where I LMAO (the shag carpet, Shiela's mental answering machine). Good job!

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