bad fanfic: the creators part 3 (crossposted)

Jan 27, 19992 posts by 2 posters
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AshRead

The last part of this very sucky fic I wrote in an hour, sick out of my mind.

Part 3: the awards. The class is getting in line at the new building. Stan and Wendy are holding hands; Ashley seems to be looking for someone. Kyle: hey, Ashley, stop fidgeting. You look like you are looking for god Cartman: he's over there :::pointing at Jesus:::: Ash: that's not who I was looking for, but thanks, fatass. Cartman: ay! I'm not fat. Ash: and the most attractive man on earth did not just walk into the room

Wendy: you like him then? Ash: yes..he's so handsome..and talented�and funny and�everything :::drool forms at her feet::: Stan: who? Trey? Kyle: she's lost it. Completely. Trey and Matt walk over. Matt: what's up with ash Cartman: she wants someone named Trey. Trey: I'm Trey. Ash: what? What? I didn't say that! Cartman you fatass! Cartman: that's what Kenny said Ash: I could kill him! Trey: you are a nice girl�look me up if you ever get out to LA? Ash: thank you. Trey walks up to the stage, Matt stands back with Ash Matt: so, you got any friends? Ash: yeah. Why, you want one? Matt: yeah. Why does he half to be the cute one. Mayor: may we welcome back to south Park, to dedicate the new building in his honor Trey..Parker. Trey: it's an honor to be here. And I just want to say..you guys are lame. Seriously, you guys! Bye. Trey walks off stage and over to Ashley Trey: wanna run off? Ash: sure They leave Wendy, Stan, Matt, Kyle, and Cartman in a line. Matt: so, what is there to do in this town? Kyle: nothing. Nice hair. Matt: thanks. Is there anyone Jewish in this place? Kyle: I am. Matt: dude! They walk off arm in arm, followed by Wendy and Stan holding hands Cartman: you guys! Seriously�where are you�Kenny? Kenny: MMMMMmmph. Mmmph. Cartman: sick! You did that with my mah! Cartman walks off. The end. This fic has only semi stunk.

Ash AIM-AshRead ICQ-26921582 Sister of Carmel " Dreams unwind. Love's a state of mind."

In article , [email] (AshRead) wrote:

For a first fic, it wasn't bad. You'll get better (both writing and health-wise). One word of advise I will pass on to you which I was given by Jeff (IIRC): Don't feel rushed to write anything, let it come at it's own pace. You'll be happier with the results.

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