Please rate my fanscript

Please note that it's incomplete.

uk.geocities.com/cprime17/homerpolitic.htm

seems pretty good so far. some amusing moments although some jokes are perhaps a touch too blatent for the simpsons, like the g spot and selma swearing at homer

but not bad, obviously you dont have a particuarly advanced plot but as you said you havent finished it yet. one other thing is im not entirely sure why homer would read lisa political books, not very likely he would do it just to be a good father but just my opinion "Cawuku1" wrote in message news:[email]...

"Cawuku1" wrote in message news:[email]...

The repeated harpings on Homer and Marge's sex life seems a bit out of place, and forced, and Burns shouldn't have remembered Homer's name at the mansion, but so far it's good.

This looks good so far, but burns wouldn't have remembered Homer's name.

Robin:) NRobin1027

Time to get a bastard life, LOSERS. What's with all this fanscript bullshit? You sad, lonely, spotty people are truly pathetic dildo-receivers.

somewhere between "insipid" and "embarassing"

sorry

Beats the hell out of some recent eps.